Mid Process Reflection

This shot is too plain and simple. Looking back at it we found it quite boring and too long. After researching different swing scenes, we have decided a new shot in which the character will swing towards the camera in and out of focus will be more interesting and capturing. 

We have decided to re film this shot because it is to time consuming therefore lacked the conventions of a thriller. We thought that the shot will be a birds eye view of Ben in bed and waking up to the sound of his phone as this will create a sense of mystery within the film opening. 

This shot is too dark, we cannot see the character so next time we will have a light on. There will be low level lighting, this will fit the conventions of a thriller a lot better. There will be various shots (cross cutting). 

In the background of this shot we see the mat used to block out the light, next time we will film in the dark so we therefore we don't have to put up the mat. The shot wont change.