This is our first draft of the film Dazed which is a rough cut edit as it requires more editing to improve it. We still need to include titles, an ident and another voiceover. The editing doesn't flow as smoothly as we desire and needs things such as transitions edited in to improve it. We have decided that a couple of the shots used are a lot longer than we'd like and reduce that thriller convention of short and tense shots that confuse the audience. We also thought the longer shots are boring and don't work well together when played. Some sound effects are needed to make the narrative clearer as to what is happening.
Also we don't like a shot at the end where the blood in the sink looks fake therefore we will edit this and make it appear more realistic as this will create a more dramatic feel. Moreover, at the end of the film opening we inserted a breaking news sound effect which did not fit the genre as it appeared very up beat and joyful, therefore we are either going to change this or delete this completely.
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